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Shorter is kinder

In this chapter What to do before AI-assisted work goes to someone else: cut it down, check it, and say how AI helped.

AI makes words cheap, but your reader’s time isn’t. Cut to what they need, put the main point first, and tell them what you’re handing over.

  1. What is this?One line on top.
  2. What do I need to know?The point, then the reasons.
  3. What do I do now?The ask, the date, the next step.
The three questions every reader brings. Answer them first, then stop. (Advice, not a study.)

Most readers don’t read every word. In 1997 studies of how people read on the web, most participants scanned a page before reading it, and in a test with 51 users, a concise version of a website scored 58 percent higher on measured usability than the original, promotional-style version.1

Plain writing is old advice with a law behind it. Since 2010, U.S. federal agencies have had to use plain writing in the documents people use to get benefits or services, file taxes or follow federal rules; the law defines it as writing that is “clear, concise, well-organized.”2 The government’s own guidelines say to write for your audience, put the most important information first, and keep sentences and paragraphs short.3

Set expectations

An AI tool can make a draft look finished. Tell your reader three things:

  • What it is. A first draft, a summary, or a finished piece?
  • What was checked. The numbers? The sources? Nothing yet?
  • What it doesn’t cover. The question it skips, or the data it didn’t have.
Notes (3)
  1. 1John Morkes and Jakob Nielsen, Concise, SCANNABLE, and Objective: How to Write for the Web (Nielsen Norman Group, 1997), https://www.nngroup.com/articles/concise-scannable-and-objective-how-to-write-for-the-web/ (accessed October 27, 2026).
  2. 2U.S. Congress, “Plain Writing Act of 2010, Public Law 111-274, 124 Stat. 2861,” United States Statutes at Large, October 13, 2010, https://www.govinfo.gov/content/pkg/PLAW-111publ274/pdf/PLAW-111publ274.pdf (accessed October 27, 2026). Cited at §3(3).
  3. 3Plain Language Action and Information Network (PLAIN), Federal Plain Language Guidelines (PLAIN / U.S. federal government (plainlanguage.gov), May 2011), https://web.archive.org/web/20250927000000/https://www.plainlanguage.gov/media/FederalPLGuidelines.pdf (accessed October 27, 2026). Cited at pp. 1; page 5; page 50; page 62.

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